8. Paper 2 first and final draft
Final Draft
In this second essay I can improve with respect to MLA format, with indent y work cited page, but I have problems gramatically and with the thesis statement. The thesis statement is not clear, however, I feel that I had improved a little bit. I commited the mistake to put a complete graphic, but the professor told me that I don't need to put the graphic I need only talk about the results. I continuos learning about writing in Englieh.
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