9. Paper 3 first and final draft.









Final Draft




In this third essay Ifeel more  comfortable, but I still have problems with the thesis statement, and with the supporting details of pharagraphs.  I will take  a DLAs about thesis statement, I believe it DLAs could help me with this topic. However I am happy although not satisfied  with  my progress in writing English. I am on the way 


































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